Quick prose I just wrote. Enjoy, comment however you like. (going to bed)?

I think I get the point of it. It was a beautiful sentiment expressed very well. You might work on your spelling, though. A miss - spelled word can change the focus of the poem, & the intent. I didn't understand the word flondeling. What exactly did you mean? But, it truly is beautiful the way you expressed yourself. I hope you post more. I enjoyed it. Good Luck & Blessings